Thursday, February 28, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 26

The purpose of carrying a concealed hand gun is usually for protection. In my opinion I don't think carrying guns should be something that just anyone can do. For example, there have been a lot of school shootings and most of them have been recent. This happened because the law of being able to buy a hand gun was established. If they are going to have this law then they should justify what type of person  is about be going around carrying a gun. Some people use it for protection and nothing else but accidents do happen so we should try to avoid them. Protection shouldn't only be a gun it could be pepper spray, a taser , or maze. This indicates that there are alternatives for defense.

2 comments:

  1. there are some parts of my essay that you can't see but just highlight them and you should be able to see them. Sorry about that!

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  2. Including the example about recent school shooting strengthened your argument!

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