Monday, February 4, 2013
HW/A: Academic Language Written Assessment Week 21 1/31
Traditionally performance enhancing drugs is used by big athletes like football to get more build and power so that they can do better in the field. In my opinion I don't think performance enhancing drugs like steroids should not be used by any athletes. Athletes should primarily think twice before trying steroids or any other drugs that would make them bigger or faster because these drugs usually have horrible side effects. These usually include mood swings or problems with the brain. This ruins your personal life and I think that's more important than getting bigger. These drugs can really mess you up and not only is it for a little while but it could be for a long period of time.
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You have persuasive ideas in your paragraph and it is easy to read. Remember to put the topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph next time. Also remember that primary means: most important or most basic.
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