Friday, February 15, 2013

HW/A: Academic Language Written Assessment Week

Should dog fighting be illegal? I think it should. Dog fighting is a form of animal cruelty and it is not fair for the animal since it can't speak for itself. The way dog fighting is done is by first trainig the dogs since they were  pups and what they to them is horrible. First they use other dogs as what is called bait, they cut off their ears and the other dogs get attracted to their blood and that makes them fight. Most of the time the bait dogs are killed in this process. The bait dog has a distinct smell and thats what drives the other dogs mad. This should be illegal because whe can't let this happen to poor innocent dogs that have so much potential in life. Whe need to stop this since it could be the formula for disaster.

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  1. You did a very good job of giving descriptive arguments to support your topic sentence. Great job!

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